Your sequence is clear and affective, this is definitely a day in the life of a toddler. Which is something everyone had experienced. The sequence shows this effectivly, showing us his imagination playing doctor. The first image is very clear and almost gives an interactive feel, as in dimension to the photo and the shadow in the front is placed nicely because it almost blocks out the sheets and drags my eyes to his face making a nice contrast of light and shadow.
The only thing I would suggest, just because I think it would add to the story or feeling into it if you flipped 5 and 6.
Your sequence is clear and affective, this is definitely a day in the life of a toddler. Which is something everyone had experienced. The sequence shows this effectivly, showing us his imagination playing doctor. The first image is very clear and almost gives an interactive feel, as in dimension to the photo and the shadow in the front is placed nicely because it almost blocks out the sheets and drags my eyes to his face making a nice contrast of light and shadow.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing I would suggest, just because I think it would add to the story or feeling into it if you flipped 5 and 6.