The pictures create a mood. It is happy. It tells a story well. It shows what he does in a day. The light in the last two pictures is a little over exposed but it's not bad. I can tell that the essay is what he does in a day. I don't do a lot of things he does in a day but I do some of the same stuff he does so I can relate to this topic. I think you are doing a really good job. I would say capture more things that he does like brushing his teeth or maybe picking out his PJ's if he does that some things like that. Good job!
The pictures create a mood. It is happy. It tells a story well. It shows what he does in a day. The light in the last two pictures is a little over exposed but it's not bad. I can tell that the essay is what he does in a day. I don't do a lot of things he does in a day but I do some of the same stuff he does so I can relate to this topic. I think you are doing a really good job. I would say capture more things that he does like brushing his teeth or maybe picking out his PJ's if he does that some things like that. Good job!
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